Kia ora, over the past few weeks in class we have been learning about persuasive writing. Below is my persuasive writing. I hope you enjoy reading it.
Elsa
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Living on Venus
Did you know that Venus is the closest planet to Earth? Hello! My name is Elsa, and I’m going to convince you to live on Venus.
I want to live on Venus because Venus is nearly the same as earth. Venus nearly has the same gravity and also has volcanoes, but it does have sulphate clouds. Also, if we can convince Venus to be our friend, the solar system will be our friend too!
Now we didn't find any life on Venus, that’s because there are a lot of sulphate clouds around it. But, I found out that the water that meets the sulfuric acid will turn into salt and water, and it will land on the surface of Venus. We can use this water to plant some trees on the planet, so the trees can make oxygen, then we can breathe without breathing masks.
Another thing I want to say is: we have 10 planets in our Solar system, they are: Sun, Mercury, Venus, Earth, Mars, Jupiter, Saturn, Uranus, Neptune and Pluto. If we can convince Mercury, Venus and Pluto(we can not convince the sun, Jupiter,Saturn, Uranus and Neptune. Because they are made of air.) it would be great and we could all be friends.
Space is AMAZING!!! There are some things that we didn't know, but we knew ourselves, we knew our Earth, we knew our Solar system!
Brilliant astronauts, please think about this, I would like you to use the water to convince Venus, create the Second beautiful homes for us.Thank you very much!!!!!
Elsa
4/6/2020
Hello Elsa, my name is Lucy I am from your Tuhi Mai Tuhi Atu class. I really like the way you put your writing and how you added lots of detail. What do you think your next blog post will be?
ReplyDeleteHi Lucy!Thank you very much!
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I will keep on publishing my work!
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